DUDE! GUYS! I KNOW THE WRITER PERSONALLY! I know parts of the story that you don't even know yet, so I know I AM doing NOTHING wrong in this story. JUST FOR YOUR INFORMATION! So you can calm your tits everyone. Oh and I am the Jordan. Be my friend? Sorry if that came off a little strong.
OH AND RIAH! BEING WHALE CRIES BECAUSE IT'S THE FIRST CHAPTER OF YO GRANDBABY! I can't wait to see what's in store and for people to see what's in store for the thing that I do know.
My oh my. I can't help but to agree with the below comments. Lol. Anyways, I loved this and your writing was still fantastic as always. It was a great forst chapter, so don't worry. Update soon, yeah? :)