Forgive Me, I Have Syned - Comments

This is a prank

@ PunkEmoBitch15
Haha, can't wait!!

@ HerNameIsAlice
I find it important to have the craziness in a story lol especially from a jealous bf/ brother lol and trust me by the end of this story crazy would be the best way to explain it lol

Uh oh. Bri Bri might be going cray cray now. Inner personality voice person!

@ PunkEmoBitch15
Lol no prob.

Breakin point

@ dearest
I already have it all planned out... even the end lol unless you find something you don't like then, you can tell me and you can give some tips on what to do lol... really suggestions are open to anyone lol

@ HerNameIsAlice
Good point lol well, what I was going for was. When the guys found out they talked her into realizing it was wrong but, as much as she wants to resist and not kiss him she finds it difficult... I guess I wanted her to be confused with what to do... even if that doesn't make sence lol so, thanks for pointing that out though :)

where is it ending? or i should come in & rescue u

Scar confuses me. She loves him and bangs him... multiple times but now that he has her, she doesn't want him... The fuck, bro? And it's just as much as HER fault then it is HIS. If she didn't want him anymore she should have told him sooner. *long sigh* Just kinda upsets me. I'm sure she's smarter than this.

You have to start it now!