Dead Boys Don't Love - Comments

whoa i love the voice you give the characters!

ahhhh this is amazing. your characters are perfect and it's just, it's perfect. Seriously.

ahhhh this is amazing. your characters are perfect and it's just, it's perfect. Seriously.

Love this story so far. keep updating it :)

Already addicted I Love both Conor and Olivia already. Also, I have to say this story flows really smoothly I like that, It doesn't seem really choppy. I love how well you can see the characters personalities.

Beauty. <3

"Damn girl, maybe you should make an appointment to declaw yourself first, coming at me with knives attached to the ends of your fingers."

WHAT THE FUCK, this is perfect. xD so sassy.

and then the end up this chapter. "come closer" lmfao

This is so funny and interesting. I love it.

I love Conor. It's official. Between "Apparently even death doesn't kill your buzz," and, upon being asked what he was, he said he was drunk rather than dead, I already love him. I can't wait to read more!

I'm in love with this so far! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh my goodness, this is killing me. It's so great.

"What are you?" "Drunk." I was laughing so hard

Okay, you have my attention. I'm officially hooked on this story. Kind of reminds me of a diary almost. Either way, I really dig it. If I found a ghost sitting on my couch, I'd scream bloody murder too.

Update soon!

The Jennifer Love Hewitt joke...ah, gotta love boob humor. This is awesome, I just wanted to let you know that I am loving it. Whenever you find the time to update, I will be stoked to read it, bu don't worry, I can feel you on not having time to write. D: Keep up the great work :D

The story's very interesting! I really like it so far!

I like the guy because he's funny. I just never got to know his name. I'm pretty excited to hear about Olivia too!

This is awesome! This dead guy is pretty hilarious, man. I can't wait to hear about Olivia!

I really, really like this. It's different. I seriously liked the summary, because I honestly don't know what the fuck kawaii is either.

Hahaha, this is already beyond perfect! Seriously, your summary really cracked me up. I genuinely laughed so hard. I love it when the word kawaii is used in terms like that. I love how this story has a serious tone, yet it's mostly humorous too. I love stories like this. I actually read short stories on my Kindle once about a girl who had been killed by her crazy ex boyfriend and she came back to haunt a detective to solve her murder and it was just really humorous. I can see this one bringing me equal if not more enjoyment! I really loved the introduction. Short, sweet, to the point with the whole "oh yeah, I'm dead" thing. And I laughed quite a bit in the second chapter when he said that he tried moving chairs around to let people know he was still there, but only succeeded in making a little girl cry. Your tone in this story is priceless, dear! It's light and care free, but I can tell that there will be serious and touching moments too. A perfect read. :) I can't wait for more! ❤

The summary really made me laugh, I don't even know why. I mean it was just funny to me. Well obviously but aaaannyyywaysss.

This sounds like a really good story in the making! I'm excited for it. A few days ago I was watching the movie Just Like Heaven with Reese Witherspoon and your story reminded me of it. I love the thought of ghosts (if that's what Conor is) and I think it's going to be really interesting to see what you're going to do with this story and where it's going to go. I can't wait to hear about Olivia, and why Conor is stuck as a ghost and hasn't passed on. Update soon c:

Apparently even death doesn't kill your buzz.

I love that line. This is really shaping into something awesome, and I can't wait to see what's next.

One suggestion from me would be about the layout. Since the background picture is text, I think that you should center the content to the right so it can be viewed more easily.

Immediately you pulled me in by your funny summary. I barely get the word kawaii either. You have a cute layout here too.

I like how this is simple. And then you just drop the line like "Hi, I'm dead" because it's just like....oh. I have to say that I really like this because normally, a non-detailed story would drive me nuts but I like the simplicity of this story. Conor makes me laugh and he seems like a guy I'd get along with.

I'm subscribing, recommending and I'm really looking forward to your updates of this!

I laughed out loud at the summary and at the last line of the first chapter. Oh my god. I wait for another update.