This is absolutely beautifully written. It's so captivating, I couldn't stop reading. The way you use such a simple vocabulary and turn it into something so haunting, so almost sinister, is truly amazing. The layout is nice too, the banner or picture at the top made me want to read this, there were a lot of possible plot lines rushing through my head when I saw it, but this one definitely is the best one I could imagine. I can not wait for more, this is something you should really be proud of. Great job, love. I can't wait for the next update you post!
August 7th, 2013 at 07:32pm