I've read this again because I can't get enough of your writing!! Hope you have more one shots like this planned!!! Favourite line by the way - "and he looked like every wet dream anyone had ever had about Synyster Gates" I just love that line so much!!! <3
Don't need to say much, you should know how brilliant it is! I've always loved your writing and needless to say, I adored this one too. All the previous commenters have said what I would be saying here so just refer to the comments before, instead of writing the same unoriginal thing or trying to define exactly how I feel about each part and what was the most amazing piece, I will simply just echo everything they say. :) to be absolutely honest I loved all of it so attempting to depict certain parts and analyse the whole thing would take too long. So again... I adored this story, much like your others - though it was completely different and the characters came across with new personalities.... It all just worked so well - I look forward to reading more from you! Thank you for writing and sharing this! :D and even though I said at the beginning that i didn't need to say much I clearly have... Sorry. ^.^
I literally screamed when I saw you had posted something new. I've really missed your writing! And this was amazing(as expected), not to mention HOT. Can't wait for whatever you have planned next! :D
Like always, another story of yours that was simply amazing. I gotta confess, I was a little upset with the "never again" thing in the end. But hey, I've always been a hopeful person, haha. Moreover, you promised you're coming up with more Bratts any time soon and I seriously can't wait for that. Seriously. You became my favorite author and, oh my...God blesses you. The fact you can write like a fucking pro plus the fact you write Bratts...Just makes me...Just...Marry me. D:
Gotta tell ya, I really saw the difference between All Along's and Never Again's characters. Brian did not begged in All Along. He was nothing but a cocky bastard. Well...At least, at the beginning. In this one he begged and it was such a turn on. Matt was different too. He didn't care. He kissed Brian and didn't care about it. When Brian kissed him in All Along, he all but freaked out. I liked it too. And...What else did I like? Oh yeah...That making out thing in the tour. That was beautiful.
YOU are beautiful.
Anyway...Hope seeing another story of yours soon. You're the best.
I agree with Rachel, This is just so believable and incredibly hot! Ugh. The way you wrote it is simply beautiful, how it flowed and moved on from one idea to the next. I like it a lot!
I love this, as I do all your stories! I love the way you write these two, you make the guys seem so believable. There was no fluffy cuteness or lovey dovey moments, just sex. Just how you described it in the summary. Brilliant! And also hot as hell! Hehe