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  • fiction246

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    Just read this again :) just thought I'd let you know. God I love this story!!! <3
    November 27th, 2014 at 12:17pm
  • My-Mental-Fiction

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    this was so awesomeee O.O !!!

    I love the tension between them, and dirty words that's slipping from Mr. Gates mouth.. Hurr hurr

    gonna have to read more of your work now :D
    August 3rd, 2013 at 03:27pm
  • fiction246

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    I've read this again because I can't get enough of your writing!! Hope you have more one shots like this planned!!! Favourite line by the way - "and he looked like every wet dream anyone had ever had about Synyster Gates" I just love that line so much!!! <3
    July 27th, 2013 at 02:57pm
  • xXxMCRsavedmexXx

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    Don't need to say much, you should know how brilliant it is! I've always loved your writing and needless to say, I adored this one too. All the previous commenters have said what I would be saying here so just refer to the comments before, instead of writing the same unoriginal thing or trying to define exactly how I feel about each part and what was the most amazing piece, I will simply just echo everything they say. :) to be absolutely honest I loved all of it so attempting to depict certain parts and analyse the whole thing would take too long.
    So again... I adored this story, much like your others - though it was completely different and the characters came across with new personalities.... It all just worked so well - I look forward to reading more from you! Thank you for writing and sharing this! :D and even though I said at the beginning that i didn't need to say much I clearly have... Sorry. ^.^
    July 13th, 2013 at 01:52pm
  • kayla1193

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    I literally screamed when I saw you had posted something new. I've really missed your writing! And this was amazing(as expected), not to mention HOT. Can't wait for whatever you have planned next! :D
    July 5th, 2013 at 02:13am
  • Nevermindd

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    Amazing.

    Like always, another story of yours that was simply amazing. I gotta confess, I was a little upset with the "never again" thing in the end. But hey, I've always been a hopeful person, haha. Moreover, you promised you're coming up with more Bratts any time soon and I seriously can't wait for that. Seriously. You became my favorite author and, oh my...God blesses you. The fact you can write like a fucking pro plus the fact you write Bratts...Just makes me...Just...Marry me. D:

    Gotta tell ya, I really saw the difference between All Along's and Never Again's characters. Brian did not begged in All Along. He was nothing but a cocky bastard. Well...At least, at the beginning. In this one he begged and it was such a turn on. Matt was different too. He didn't care. He kissed Brian and didn't care about it. When Brian kissed him in All Along, he all but freaked out. I liked it too. And...What else did I like? Oh yeah...That making out thing in the tour. That was beautiful.

    YOU are beautiful.

    Anyway...Hope seeing another story of yours soon. You're the best.
    July 3rd, 2013 at 09:03am
  • BlackMorphine

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    Meu Deus, que emoçãaaaaaaaao! Você por aqui mais uma vez, com esta história maravilhosa que deveria ter uma continuação U___U Aguardando mais!
    July 3rd, 2013 at 02:37am
  • fiction246

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    Damn I wish this was more than a one shot!!!! This was awesome!!! I love it :) I can't wait to see what else you have in store!!!
    July 1st, 2013 at 08:42am
  • StacieIerogeance

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    ohhhhhhhhhhhh i like this already i cant wait to read more
    June 30th, 2013 at 07:27pm
  • AJ9

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    That was incredible. Really well written and believable. Cool
    June 30th, 2013 at 06:58pm
  • Matt Sanders;

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    That was hot and you're relaly good at writing :)!
    June 30th, 2013 at 05:46pm
  • Synful Cocktail

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    I agree with Rachel,
    This is just so believable and incredibly hot!
    Ugh. The way you wrote it is simply beautiful, how it flowed and moved on from one idea to the next.
    I like it a lot!
    June 30th, 2013 at 03:38pm
  • heretic.

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    I love this, as I do all your stories! I love the way you write these two, you make the guys seem so believable. There was no fluffy cuteness or lovey dovey moments, just sex. Just how you described it in the summary. Brilliant! And also hot as hell! Hehe
    June 30th, 2013 at 01:22pm