July 6th, 2014 at 05:47am
First of all the layout is beautiful and your summary is concise and enticing.
The dialogue of the Winchesters is great. I really loved the description of Sam being the good cop with Dean's questioning, like he always is. All the Supernatural details were really spot-on and I appreciated reading all the familiar things that they do. Great job on that.
Sally's comment about Dean made me laugh too. Other than that, I can't comment too much on the Being Human characters as I haven't seen the series.
But wow that ending! Talk about leaving the reader begging for more. It was absolutely perfect. All the mismatching details and then that question at the end. So. Good.
I really enjoyed this, though I do wish that there had been more to the story just to satisfy my curiosity. Good luck in the contest!
Thank you(: I worry every time I write SPN fanfiction that I'm not getting the boys right, so it makes me really excited when readers tell me that I've done a good job. You have made me all warm and fuzzy inside. As for the ending, well I'm half-asshole and half-lazy so I'll probably never add on to it. I'm leaving it up to your imagination.
Side note: totally watch Being Human because not only does it rock but UNF the vampire I mean goddamn. But besides that it's really great(:
Aaaanywho, thank you for this lovely comment you have made my night :D