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So, I just got caught up on reading -the second and third chapters actually- and I still really love this! I think it's actually kind of ironic and funny how Daniela turned out. John still seems like an asshole, and I absolutely love Nikki! Since the first chapter, and now this third, she just strikes me as the "crazy bitch" type in a good, revenging way. It's an awesome story <3

@ VeiledPrincess
Okay, thanks for the clarification! From the pictures, I guessed that Dominick might be a girl, but I wasn't sure xD Definitely an unusual and original name for a girl, by the way, and thanks for describing her lol

@ Necrosocium
Actually Dominick is a girl... I don't know why the link isn't going to the main picture but picture her with glasses and short brown hair until I can fix the link :) And thanks! I spent a good half hour making sure it was perfect

Okay, so I'm here to drop by a comment! Yay! First off, I have to say I love the layout. You chose a really good picture. I usually don't comment on layouts unless I really like them though, so congrats on that xD You did a really good job writing too, and I loved how quickly you just jumped into the story. I only have one mistake I caught, towards the end. At the end after Daniela had punched Dominik, you said he had fell (I think) and that should be changed to fallen. Other than that, I think you're good in that area.

I do have one question though. Dominik is a guy right? I just assumed because of the name but when I clicked the link you had at the bottom, it showed on photobucket a lot of pics of girls, even if the main picture wouldn't show up for me. So I just have to ask.

Anyway, good job and I wish you the best of luck continuing forward!