I really loved this. When some people write about female hockey players, i feel like they either over exaggerate the girl's skills or make her fall in love with someone the first day with the team. This is nothing like those stories at all. It is extremely refreshing and i cannot wait to see where it goes. :)
You're an exquisite writer! You are so detailed and descriptive. This chapter was perfect, and saying I can't wait for another update is an understatement :)