Forbidden Fruit Is Always the Sweetest - Comments

Thanks! It was so hard. I tried to keep up with her sweet and innocent feel and tried to breathe a bit more life into Havoc through her eyes. Again very tough because they aren't my characters. The next update will definately be in Narissa's POV. Which should make the update come a lot sooner lol. :)

Amazing update! I think I like Narissa better though... Still, it was pretty interesting to see you write for Silver. I think you did a good job ^-^

@ Write.with.Love
Well then the full blown love scene will make you blush. Maybe lol. Thanks for your support

I really love this! Especially Rayden drunk kiss for Narissa. It almost made me blush. Almost.

@OurLullaby I'll have the next part up later today

I like it :) update soon?