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  • Clever Tomato

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    SeXuAl TeNsIoN
    Woo hoo :3
    I like how Gerard is all 80's-cliche-badboy xD
    July 6th, 2013 at 06:36am
  • pixiewayro

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    I just want to agree with what's already been said... <3 xoxo
    July 5th, 2013 at 10:19pm
  • ShotToRemember

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    This is pretty cute so far:) Along with paragraphing it, though, you should double-space. It adds to readability. Really, though, it's adorable!
    July 5th, 2013 at 09:44pm
  • Clever Tomato

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    UHHHHHH PARAGRAPHS PLEASE
    Aha, sorry bout that.But really, paragraph it :F
    I like it so far :3 keep writing
    July 3rd, 2013 at 12:43am
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