Wow, this is really awesome. You can grip the emotions when they talk to each other about their scars and burns and you can imagine how uncomfortable they get because of their situations. (I'd jump Jack in a second... uhhhh... who said that? :'D (I still like Zack more irl(and in the story ;D))) It's like they are real and writing it by themselves. I feel how bad they are feeling! The love I developed for this fic is impalpable! You need to continue soon or I will drown in my own tears (oh well... If that story continues to be that sad I will anyways :D) (Ohmygod, my comments are ridiculous... I am sorry :( I just needed to write you how much I love this one! keep going!)