Absitively Posolutely - Comments

I love this!!

@ atomika wave.
<3 that is one of my favourite comments someone has ever left me! Thank you

Seems like a great beginning!
Be sure to include who's talking when, though. There's a lot of dialogue and not really anything defining who's supposed to be talking. Like if Scout's talking, be sure to have '"Lalala Sidney," Scout said, running her fingers through her hair in frustration.' Helps to both describe characters and keep the reader from getting confused about who's talking. Also, it'd help if you were a bit more descriptive about what's happening, the story seems a bit rushed. Other than that, I really enjoy this story so far and am going to stick with it. I love nhl fanfics :x really good beginning, love those love/hate relationships <3

I agree like this story! But please no baby please.

cool :)

I like it but does she have to become pregnant

I like it