Three Text Messages, Four Missed Calls - Comments

Oh my gosh this is so great I read it at dinner

Smuteness is quite possible my new favorite thing be. Like you're lucky that I don't I all fucking Hannah Montana here and start singing best of both worlds bc that's really what it is. Abbreviating cumslut was a while new low with text talk (you could call it an all time low, eeeeeeeh?) but it was absolutely fab as usual. Hard not to love hardcore smut and then loving cuddles. You've both yet to answer me like do they explode if they go over twelve hours without getting off fuck they're both serious cs's. <3

HEY I'VE BEEN READING THIS SINCE YOU STARTED IT BUT HAVEN'T COMMENTED BECAUSE I SUCK AND FORGET TO DO THINGS BUT I THINK THIS IS SO CUTE AND PRETTY ORIGINAL AND YEAH, I LIKE IT. It just seems...so like, real. Like, real Alex and Jack would say most of these things. It's cute and hot and yeah. Kudos to ya'll for writing this bc it's awesome ????

??? all i recall about this chapter is that there was rimming and they got off like four times consecutively and that is some fucking hardcore sexting/smut right there i am so pleased. wasnt this story like pointless fluff at the beginning? its progression to pointless sex has been fabulous omg. see thats what i call a perfect fanfic story arc: the smut increases until there is nothing else. beautiful. for serious though do these two explode if they dont get off with the other somehow every twenty four hours. i both incredibly love and really fucking hate you people, as per usual, so xoxo kiss kiss hug hug, fuck you

hnnng this is so great ugh. jack defiantly needs to bottom in the next chapter ok please.

i....woah....u,m..... holy shit.

Yay! Im so happy this was updated!!!! <3

AHH THIS IS SO GREAT I LOVE IT

dont pressure me like that i cant write smut on command damn it bonnie i dont have time to exist currently much less write smut GEEZ on the other hand i dont even have anything to complain about now this story is like pure sexting its totally fucking awesome. when i saw the title of this chapter i decided i was going to slap one of you if it wasnt about riding but apparently that wont be neccessary so its all good. therye such sluts tho like do they get off five times a day or i dont quite understand how they manage to constantly be this horny but its also amazing so. ive gotta go draw ivy or something so au revior <3

They should fight and have make up phone sexx!!!!! This story is fucking awesome.

you know what i dont fucking care how long ago you wrote this i have been annoying shauna about writing me smut for at least three months so i am still claiming a part in the existence of all this dirtiness ok i need something to be proud of in life and if all ive got is a somewhat sexual texting fanfiction to desperately call minor credit for than i will fucking fight for that dont argue me with this im good at writing persuasive essays i will go there (not really but im committed) the innocent and naughty every other week is fabulous and heavily endorsed seventy two thumbs up rose/bella out

ahhhhh this is so great i love it so much <3 <3

sexting is some hard shit to do man ugh
but smut is so much fun to write/post wot why don't you like no stop that

i got rice everywhere and there was too much salsa in that burrito im dissapointed. but on the other hand theres nothing like some good old fashioned sexting. theres nothing old fashioned about it at all but you know whatever fuck that my brain is collapsing ok. these two get off with each other like three times daily holy crap how are they even constantly that horny its awesome. and yes alex is a total slut i bet hes one of those people who dressed up in lingerie and bunny ears for halloween. and then fucks jack for like three days yes ah smut

i got rice everywhere and there was too much salsa in that burrito im dissapointed. but on the other hand theres nothing like some good old fashioned sexting. theres nothing old fashioned about it at all but you know whatever fuck that my brain is collapsing ok. these two get off with each other like three times daily holy crap how are they even constantly that horny its awesome. and yes alex is a total slut i bet hes one of those people who dressed up in lingerie and bunny ears for halloween. and then fucks jack for like three days yes ah smut

i read the first two lines or w/e and im excited but i have to eat a burrito now BRB

WHAT DO YOU MEAN I DIDNT COMMENT ON THIS YES I DID i keep reading this and then being like 'ill comment in a minute' and then forgetting to and subsequently forgetting what happened in the chapter frickety frick. wanst jack just complaining about his ass being sore? fuck that he loves it. mmm spanking. i like how theyre both interchangeably dominant like jack gets spanked and then alex gets fucked or w/e its hot. when jack started whining i assumed his ass hurt from bottoming but no apparently not. that should happen though. they should do that. jack needs to bottom more. where is this going ill shut up and finish my essay HA

awww i love this so much omg afhadbbdja<333 cant wait for the next update!!

i have been reading this story for all these weeks and i dont remember the layout once changing i only today actually looked at the background and realized how it related to the story wow i am really incredibly stupid. thats cute though aw, bunny bear love. and their balance because cute and dirty literally pains my heart i dont know why either you think its ok to do this im still really upset about everything

TTHEY NEED TO FUCKKKKKKKKKKKKK