I enjoyed reading this little story, I would love to read more if there ever is any. You did a good job with your photo. Overall, I really liked this. Thank you for entering my contest dear
August 8th, 2013 at 08:12pm
Title: 2/5
Layout: 0/5
Grammar: 4/5
Overall Story: 4/5
I love that they had a son together and that you ended this story with him saying "Hi daddy..." It made me tear up a bit. I wish you would have put a little more thought into detail and into their love life before Fred had died, but other than that, nice job. Good luck!