This honestly the best bmth story ever. You should think about writing a book, cause the way you make such a beautiful thing with words is absolutely breathtaking. They way yo describe things are just... wow. Very talented.
So I lied. I said that after reading Glass Cutter I'd give up finding another Oliver story that could compare. HO-LY FUUUUCK. That's quite literally the only thing my brain could process after reading the first two chapters. Needless to say I'm beyond intrigued by the relationship Fliss and Oli share, not to mention the narrator's relationship to them as well. So excited to have another great story to read and reread again. :)
Hooooooly fucking cow! Why didn't you tell me that you were writing this?! You're honestly getting so much better with each chapter you write. I'm not kidding.
The way you describe everyone's relationship with Fliss, and how she changed as time went on, and the fact that Oli would never actually recognize her in front of anyone, completely draws me in. As soon as I started reading I knew I wouldn't be able to stop until I ran out of chapters! I don't know if you know how serious I am when I say that you're a truly amazing author. You blow my mind!
Maybe you do, but I don't think you have a clue as to just how beautiful this story is. It has so much emotion in it- I can actually feel the pain and the longing. It's brilliant! There's so much I can relate to, and that's even better. Really, it deserves more of an audience; please do continue writing. Oh, and, if you've ever read The Virgin Suicides, the way you tell this story, reminds me a lot of it's writing style.