Classroom Murderer - Comments

ohhhhhhhhhhh this is interesting so far

This was short but eerie, and I really liked it. I liked how you summarised the story but did it in a way that was quick and informative, as opposed to a long piece that dragged on and didn't really give up what the readers are supposed to know. I also like that the main character is made out to be this sweet, innocent girl, but she's nothing like what she seems and that's very reflective in real life - no one is who they seem to be. I really like this so far, and I'm intrigued to see where you go with this

I like this idea. I like to see what you plan on doing with this story.