Diary of an Unorthadox Pedophile - Comments

I started reading this since one of my friends recommended it and wow, I think it is fantastic so far! I've always like that teacher/student thing going on.
Plus your description of the entries is very believable. Just wow =D I can't wait to see what else is coming!

I was so please to see that you've updated (I've been gone for a couple days) and just.. wow. I love how this really sounds like a diary: it's so personal and that adds to the creep factor in my opinion. And the teacher/student relationship is killing me with the way Cherokee is acting. I just really love this.

I just noticed how authentic the "diary" is...awesome! I love this teacher dude and his strange obsession with Cherokee ^^ I really love the idea of student-teacher affairs cause it is so taboo, like The Dodger already said :D

Well, @sempiternal basically summed up my exact thoughts.
I'm such a sucker for taboo love stories like these. This is such a different format of writing that I didn't think I would like but it turns out I really do. I'm looking forward to reading more of his creepy--er, obsessive thoughts.

To be honest I've been watching this story for some time now. In fact, I even mentioned it in one of my recommendation blogs. I didn't know how I felt about it at first, but as it's progressing I have decided that I do in fact enjoy it. Quite a bit so, actually. I love the diary / journal format and how ultra creepy this guy actually is in all reality. I have the guiltiest pleasure for student / teacher story and I can tell that this one truly is going to be a delight. Mainly because this dude is weird. He seems like he could have the potential to actually kill her and keep her body in his closet if she like turned him down or something. I like Cherokee's name very much - it's unique without being off the wall. Also, I like how she seems so fierce at sometimes but she shows moments of weakness. It makes her human and proves she's not completely ruthless. I can't wait to see how this advances! I'm anxiously awaiting an update, m'dear. ❤

I really enjoy your writing and this story is awesome!(: youre such a good writer

@ Polite Stranger
That's a really good point that I've been thinking about also. Hopefully this new chapter helps out a bit. I've had that pointed out in my writing before, but usually I'm able o fix it. I'm a 16 year old girl, so I'm working from scratch writing from this guy's point of view but I do sincerely appreciate your good criticism :)

still love it :) awesome chapter!

This was actually refreshing.
I loved the last update. :)

I liked how you crossed opportunity out, because it shows that this is really like a diary. That was cute.

I really like this and I'm looking forward to more updates. :)

I'm really digging this story. The only thing I think needs to be changed though, is the fact that the narrator kind of sounds like a teenager rather than a thirty-two year old history teacher. I don't know though, maybe that's just me.

I do really like this though, especially the journal point of view. Everything seems so right about it. The title is also amazing. Great work, I can't wait to see what else you do with this.

I just love your writing so much, and this is such an interesting idea. The way he starts crushing on Cherokee is so natural and the realism in that makes it so much creepier/better.
I'm so looking forward to reading more.

This is so creepy that I love the hell out of it. It's so creative and I like the diary writing style. Subscribing!

@ chekov.
That comment made me laugh Thanks though

This is such a good idea. Interesting, and everyone's a sucker for some unorthodox pedophillia. Great job, though. I'll be subscribing and recommending.

Interesting chapter!

I like the diary wirting style a lot- sounds pretty good!

I really like your story so far... Can't wait for the next chapter.