Wow. My favourite parts of this is that you've put in blocks of text, almost as though it were the moments in Brian's head, like he was wavering in and out of consciousness. His fear of death and falling asleep just highlights how much his illness has affected him and what he's done with it. I love how you've just taken the prompt and run with it to create something so amazing! Thank you so much for entering my contest :)
July 22nd, 2013 at 11:04am