I Don't Wanna Say Goodbye - Comments

Missing this insanely! If you can, please give us an update sometime :)

I really love your story! I'm looking forward for a new chapter!

Ok, I'm taking back what I said earlier... I can't wait! Please update again >.<

We will wait until you have the chance to
write the next chapter xd

@ lovemelavender;
Take your time! We'll be waiting <3

I'm sorry I haven't updated lately, I've been really sick and on top of pregnancy. I have been working on the next chapter whenever I'm feeling good, I just don't wanna rush through and post a crappy chapter. I hope you'll all still keep reading and hang in there with me. :)

why arent you writing anymore?

pleeeeaaaaassssseeeeee!!!!!
write the next chapter!
i cant wait anymore

Again, I can't wait for your next update, which is hopefully soon? Fucking loving it dude :)

I can't tell you how much I'm enjoying this. I swear to god, I'm having goosebumps every chapter! So good! Get on with it!

I think you're doing a great job so far. I was actually going to make the exact same comment as p & b did below re: the dialogue. The part I found particularly confusing was the 'Do you want to finish this in your room?" line, which you immediately followed with narrative from Angie's pov - I really thought it was her that said it and I had to read it a few times to make sure. You don't need he said, she said, just a new line like p&b suggests. Anyway, thats a really minor thing so don't worry - the plot is great and I like your characters. I'm enjoying it a lot so please keep writing :)

@ poison and blood.
Thanks. :) I'm sorry about the dialogue confusion. Every time someone is speaking, I usually try to make it a point to put "Billie said" or "I said" so that its clearly defined. And then from there, I space the dialogue so that you can see the conversation developing. I just got done rereading this chapter and I noticed, toward the end of the elevator scene that some of the dialogue was confusing which I apologize for, I also noticed quite a few spelling errors. I will be focusing more on these things, but I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)

Oooh! I didn't expect that so soon, but good all the same!

One thing, however...I am having trouble determining who is speaking during the dialogues because they are not properly defined. Please keep that in mind when writing! (:
One thing that will help you a whole lot is to make a new paragraph for each person who speaks. It's is writing etiquette that a lot of people forget.
Keep it up!

Holy shit... this just keeps getting better! I don't even care how long the chapters are. I mean, sure I wouldn't mind some longer ones but as long as you keep updating, I am happy. Also, I love how infatuated he is with her and I can't wait to see what he or she will do next.

This just makes me want to cry it's so perfect.
Ahh!
When I saw a new chapter, I kinda squealed.
Update soon, please...so I don't explode.

again a great chapter
i want to fucking know who the woman at the end is !
please write the next chapter fast!

@ animegirl93
Thanks. :) I apologize for the short chapters. Most of the time, I write from my phone and it makes a little look like a lot. I'm working on it though. :)

great chapter
you write awesome
but i think the chapters are way too short
i hope the next one is on soon

I love this so much. Addictive and sexy!
Awesome writing, keep it up!

This is just too awesome. Can't wait to see more