Awe, I want there to by more! Not even gonna lie, I decided to read this story because I really love the song Painting Flowers, and I really liked this story as well.
It was really fast paced, which I'm sure is how you wanted it, but I wouldn't have minded it being a bit longer and more in depth about what was going on, exactly.
I did like it though. You packed a whole lot of drama and emotion into a small amount of words, and that was great. I also really liked how you used the lyrics from the song in the story. I've never really seen a story where the band member uses lyrics from his song to make a point, so that was interesting.
My feels are fried, which is a totally great thing. Ugh this was so sad yet good. I love your layout, and I really like how you used your lyrics and photo for this story it worked very well. I wish there was a happy ending but I'm happy with how you chose to end it. Great job dear
It was really fast paced, which I'm sure is how you wanted it, but I wouldn't have minded it being a bit longer and more in depth about what was going on, exactly.
I did like it though. You packed a whole lot of drama and emotion into a small amount of words, and that was great. I also really liked how you used the lyrics from the song in the story. I've never really seen a story where the band member uses lyrics from his song to make a point, so that was interesting.
Nice job!