Still Painting Flowers For You - Comments

  • losing control.

    losing control. (4250)

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    Awe, I want there to by more! Not even gonna lie, I decided to read this story because I really love the song Painting Flowers, and I really liked this story as well.

    It was really fast paced, which I'm sure is how you wanted it, but I wouldn't have minded it being a bit longer and more in depth about what was going on, exactly.

    I did like it though. You packed a whole lot of drama and emotion into a small amount of words, and that was great. I also really liked how you used the lyrics from the song in the story. I've never really seen a story where the band member uses lyrics from his song to make a point, so that was interesting.

    Nice job!
    August 10th, 2013 at 12:46am
  • LoveForGiraffes

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    My feels are fried, which is a totally great thing. Ugh this was so sad yet good. I love your layout, and I really like how you used your lyrics and photo for this story it worked very well. I wish there was a happy ending but I'm happy with how you chose to end it. Great job dear
    August 8th, 2013 at 08:04pm
  • dizzyhurricanes

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    This is an amazing story! I love your writing :)
    July 29th, 2013 at 03:11am
  • Heartagram

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    amazing! update pleaseee <33
    July 14th, 2013 at 11:46pm