Grammar: 23/25 Layout: 20/25 Originality and Story-telling:30 Rule following: 10/10
Over all: 83/100
All right darling, your story was good but I feel that if it were longer you would have scored higher. This is what we get when we procrastinate, right? Well, maybe not longer but a little more descriptive. Green Arrow isn't a common character here, I would've liked to know more about him.
I've never had an attraction to Green Arrow but after doing a little research I can conclude that you didn't butcher his character. Which is nice.
You had no errors that I could point out (surprise, surprise) but there were some sentences that seemed off in the fact that they were choppy and awkward but over all it was a nice read.
Your layout was readable and that's all I really cared about.
AND THAT LAST SECTION. THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL. ::cries:
Side note:
Stop fucking doubting yourself, Daisy. It wasn't crap.
Layout: 20/25
Originality and Story-telling:30
Rule following: 10/10
Over all: 83/100
All right darling, your story was good but I feel that if it were longer you would have scored higher. This is what we get when we procrastinate, right? Well, maybe not longer but a little more descriptive. Green Arrow isn't a common character here, I would've liked to know more about him.
I've never had an attraction to Green Arrow but after doing a little research I can conclude that you didn't butcher his character. Which is nice.
You had no errors that I could point out (surprise, surprise) but there were some sentences that seemed off in the fact that they were choppy and awkward but over all it was a nice read.
Your layout was readable and that's all I really cared about.
AND THAT LAST SECTION. THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL. ::cries:
Side note:
Stop fucking doubting yourself, Daisy. It wasn't crap.