@ ofmiceandme ((I'm actually 14, ohp. .-.)) But thank you for the constructive criticism! I mean, I'm not the greatest at smut...my other stuff is a bit better, still sucks though. I tried ah ;_;
Love the username, but 15. Oh God. Jesus does need coffee. (Don't ask, I do get the ATL reference in the name)
You probably should have gotten someone a little older for the smut, because some parts were unrealistic and read a bit awkwardly. No hate, constructive criticism.
Nevertheless. I'm glad to see Alex and Jack take their relationship to the next level. I think it'll open many doors for them!
Smut isn't thaaaaat hard! :) after reading (maybe watching. lol wut.) a whole bunch of it, I just kinda developed my own style of writing it. Wow, that sounds weird. But if you want me to, I'm sure I could help. :3
@love me always Thank you ! Glad to hear you're enjoying it ! & I know she's told me before, but I don't think that @m0riarty is from Washington..idk though haha
i like this story a lot it's a good story, i 've been reading this story for a while and i guess o never took the initiative to comment on it but its really good and i hope to see more :) and and @m0riarty are you in washington and go to the washington warped? because i was there too and i got to meet christian too and i got to get a picture. just wondering if that doesn't sound to weird.
I touched Andy Glass from We Came As Romans (and got a picture with the whole band) and i took a picture and had a conversation with Jason Butler from letlive. ALSO I MET CHRISTIAN NOVELLI ONE OF MY FAVOURITE YOUTUBERS okay I'm calm now