There Was Me and You - Comments

This was definitely cute! I liked the story though I do wish there was a bit more to explain their relationship and how it grew, it was very clear that their feelings for each other were strong. Overall I really enjoyed it! :)

There's a couple of things grammar and spelling-wise. I don't have a ton to say as far as the plot besides maybe a little more show and a little less tell. For future reference, I wouldn't use the caps again in your layout. It's a little tricky to read. Otherwise nice job.

@ midnightmssuki
That was what completed the picture in my head. I just hope it doesn't mess anything up since there was already a pitt. Player given out and at the time he was jersey.

Awww! I loved it! When I saw he signed in Pittsburgh, my first thought was this story. I'm glad you worked it in.

@ midnightmssuki
Right now hunger is preventing me from writing and grocery shopping from eating.

@ defaultmemory
Oh good. I'm glad we're both in the same place then, LOL! ;)

@ midnightmssuki
That's how I feel waiting for you to post half the time lol.

@ defaultmemory
I'm going to die waiting for the end. Just so you know. :)

@midnightmssuki
I'm working on it right now! hopefully tonight. I am not kidding when i say the idea came to be because i was watching The Finder on Netflix.

Oooooo!! I'm so intrigued!!!! Can't wait for your next update. :)