He Remembered - Comments

Snow.White.Queen. (100)

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Thank you for entering my contest dear! I'll do my best to comment on the other three of your entries today too. :)
So I thought this was so cute! Your descriptions were really good and I adored the flashbacks! They seem so cute together. There are a few mistakes in here, and one or two lines where you've used a word that you didn't mean to, so they kind of don't make sense. But over all I liked it, good job!

July 28th, 2013 at 06:04pm

hppypaintingswithjoe (100)

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[GUSHES OVER HOW CUTE THAT WAS]

July 10th, 2013 at 03:01pm

SleeplessSymphony (100)

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This was adorable, the best so far ^^

July 8th, 2013 at 10:03pm

b5sosleepy (100)

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You've been doing such a great job with all of these, but this one is my favorite so far :) so cute.

July 8th, 2013 at 09:40pm

ironically1234 (100)

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@ leeyahbvb97
Aw thanks! I'm glad you like it ^_^

July 8th, 2013 at 07:58pm

leeyahbvb (100)

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Oh my god this was just so cute. At first the way it started I thought maybe they were like not going to be together any more but then Alex went through his flashbacks of all the cute times and how much he loved Jack and it was just so cutesy and awesome.

July 8th, 2013 at 05:25pm