The Remains of My Wasted Youth - Comments

  • Snow.White.Queen.

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    I liked this one even more than the last! I feel so sorry for Alex, and almost a little sorry for Jack too. Being married but then falling in love with someone else. I think this one had a brilliant idea. The lyrics thrown in there were cute too, they added a nice touch to this. I liked the way you phrase things too, for some reason when you said ''stolen kisses'' it made me smile. Good job, love. Smile
    July 28th, 2013 at 06:09pm
  • ironically1234

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    @ Geraldinetojr
    Aw thanks! I think I might. I need to finish this, my horror fic and my other jalex fic but maybe like in a few weeks I could turn this into one or into a two shot or something :D

    Whoa it's hard to imagine them growing up. I mean they're still as silly as ever. It's so weird to think that one day Alex will be a father and a husband and everything.
    July 14th, 2013 at 07:43pm
  • Geraldinetojr

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    how you described alex from transforming into a middle aged grown man from a wild young adult was an exact depiction of Alex in real life. it gave this nostalgic feeling that ATL is growin up just like us :(
    July 14th, 2013 at 05:09pm
  • Geraldinetojr

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    how you described alex from transforming into a middle aged grown man from a wild young adult was an exact depiction of Alex in real life. it gave this nostalgic feeling that ATL is growin up just like us :(
    July 14th, 2013 at 05:09pm
  • Geraldinetojr

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    Can you continue this to be a chaptered fic after you've done the 30day challenge thing? :3 it's so amazing i loved it!!
    July 14th, 2013 at 05:07pm
  • ironically1234

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    Aw thanks :) No dont cry! Think about unicorns and ice cream and the new atl music in the fall!
    July 14th, 2013 at 04:54pm
  • AllTimeToni

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    I'm crying, this is so sad and perfect and would make an amazing chapters story oh god
    July 14th, 2013 at 03:38pm