Black Hair and Pale Skin. - Comments

I enjoyed this. It was very interesting. I'm not really one to read a Frerard (though I have maybe once or twice in my life), but if this had been a full length story, I would probably be savoring every single chapter. I can tell from the little piece of lyrics that you put into the summary, that it fit the story perfectly. It was very detailed and I loved it so much.
Thank you for putting the entry into my contest and I wish you the most of luck.

oh and good luck in the contest!

ii love this i love this i looveee thisXD it's so well written, and there's so much emotion behind everything they do, and you get a back story without actually GETTING a back story.. perfection! i just wish there was more:) thanks for the great read!