What Lies Beneath - Comments

  • aDreamersKiss

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    I can't wait for you to continue writing this!!
    July 29th, 2013 at 02:04am
  • somethingblue

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    For some reason I have a habit of reading your saddest chapters while at a friend's house. Always the same one, always in the morning, and always crying while she's sleeping.
    This is so well-written and I love how you were able to show how they felt better, then all at once everything crashed on them, and they started to heal once again. Okay I'm going to shut up now. Update soon!!
    July 22nd, 2013 at 01:17am
  • DreamtOfYou

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    Sheesh! It's only the first chapter and you have me bawling my eyes out! But I can't wait to read MORE! It's a cruel cycle...
    July 21st, 2013 at 07:19pm
  • dirtonyournewshoes

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    HOLY MOTHER OF EVERYTHING THAT IS WONDERFUL. I can't wait to read more of this! The first story was amazing, and this sequel I can't wait to read!!!! :D
    July 21st, 2013 at 09:56am
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    Well, if you wanted feels and tears. You succeeded. Damn.
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    July 21st, 2013 at 07:04am
  • monalisa19

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    Love it! Can't wait to see what happens!
    July 21st, 2013 at 04:09am
  • Shortskirt-Bluescarf

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    Oh its so good to have the group back! The diary entries were a very good call to pass the time. You've said so much in such a short time. The balance between emotions and details was spot on. Look forward to more!!! =)
    July 20th, 2013 at 10:24am
  • monalisa19

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    Love it! Can't wait to see what happens!
    July 20th, 2013 at 07:12am
  • AwesomePossum13

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    This is amazing!! I'll admit that I sqeaked a little when I saw the chapter, I'm excited for more! :D
    July 20th, 2013 at 07:11am
  • Death_to_Roses

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    This is an amazing start. :) Aww, I just read like 2 other comments that said the same thing. That means you're doing something right! :D
    July 20th, 2013 at 04:25am
  • violet.valo

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    Oh my god. You are brilliance and a bag of chips. Don't ever stop writing...especially this story.
    July 20th, 2013 at 01:59am
  • becca2345

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    An amazing start to what seems is going to be an amazing sequel, am looking forward to it.
    July 19th, 2013 at 11:58pm
  • Cherrycoke12

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    What an amazing way to start the sequel, it jumped through time smothly! Can't wait to see what happens next! Gah! In tears reading the last few chapters of Vague Shadows and this first chapter ! :')
    July 19th, 2013 at 11:40pm
  • violet.valo

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    Hi! I'm really excited about your sequel; I can hardly contain myself! Vague Shadows was such a wonderful re-telling, I only wish Sherlock was still here. But we will keep calm, and carry on as they say.
    Love your work love,
    -Vi
    July 8th, 2013 at 05:08am