Demonic Angel - Comments

This is an interesting intro you have here! What I really like is the contrast towards the end, that some angels are demons. I like that because sometimes, demons are synonymous with fallen angels. And it's clear to me that the angel in this story isn't a good one. Keep the story going, it's good!

@ Snow.White.Queen.
Naah, it's okay, you can't get only applauses all the time, you know :D

@ di-nex
Oh well that makes more sense then aha!
Sorry if I came across harsh, I didn't realize how mean I sounded, sorry

@ Snow.White.Queen.
I probbaly should have pointed out this in the summary, sorry, but "his" is capitalized everywhere on purpose :) But thanks for telling other mistakes!

Here from Le Comment Swap.
So I'll start off with something positive, because I have constructive criticism to come in a minute. I like the layout, it's pretty.

''His evening cigarette'' You have not used a full sentence before this, therefore you do not need to use capitalization.

''and left empty balcony without any sound.'' should really be, and left the empty....

''with wings in His balcony again.'' In should be on and you capitalized his again.

I could go on, but seeing as I was able to pick out all of those mistakes in just that short first paragraph, I'll take it that you get my message. Your use of grammar and capitalization is terrible in here. I mean this with no offence but if you proof read this would be amazing.