The Sniper - Comments

I'm kind of sad that this is just a short, stand alone story. D: I would have totally loved to read more about Liz's character and the story about what brought her to this point. Especially about the sniper. Still, it is lovely enough on it's own. The chaos of what was going on and her confusion was channeled well through your words. ._. It was tragic. Now I'm sad. Now I'll have to go read more of your work.

@your_one_addiction: Thanks so much :) I'm really glad it was enjoyed. I think it was my point to make is confusing, so I'm glad I got that across as well as the looking through her eyes. Thanks so much!

Woah... that was a trip. I really love your writing style and how everything just flowed, as if I was watching a movie. The way you wrote this I felt like I was in the place of Liz, everything rushing by quickly and slowly at the same time. Not really sure of what is going on, what was real and what was imagined. This was an excellent read and I recommended it. I'm glad comment swap sent me here because this was just lovely. I don't really know what else to say ... just good things all around really. Beautiful story.