The Shade of the Joshua Tree - Comments

I loved the start of this story: Pueblo Indians paint their doors turquoise to fend off bad spirits. It pulled me in right away. And then you connected it with the idea of painting the insides first, which I thought was just a really good piece of advice for people, in general.

I've always found myself interested by Area 51 and aliens and that sort of thing, so I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this. This had a really good start!

@ semolina
Oh my . Thank you! I'm glad someone else out there is interested in this type of stuff, because I was so self conscious about posting it.

I would say I'm going to update soon, but I want to take my time with this one :).

I love it. It's very well written and deserves a lot more subscribers. I'm really interested in aliens, government cover-ups, conspiracies and things like that, so this naturally appealed to me. But the way you write is incredibly skillful. Your metaphors and style all together remind me of how I write, actually, but you know how to make it flow a lot better than me.