I promise you that this doesn't suck at all. It take a lot to get me into a story and I'm addicted to this one, especially this chapter.
The fact that Josh came to Sam's rescue when Mike was about to force her into that really shows that he does at least care. Then for him to take his time cleaning her wounds and getting her blood to help her body heal itself, to me, shows that he does love her. He does have a very violent, strange way of showing it though.
Personally, I love this side of Josh. He's sweet, caring, careful and he seems like he wouldn't hurt her on purpose.
Even though I like Josh when he is like this, I still wish Chris and the guys would hurry the fuck up and save her!
I just knew my philosophy of good things come to those who wait would come in handy. This wasn't a terrible update at all I absolutely adored it! I wanted to drop kick Mike Fuentes in the face for what he was doing but I can see that Balz already did that for me. I am finding it kinda sketchy that he's being so very nice but I'm just going to be content with it for now. Great update. It truly was.
I loved this update. You came back with a bang! I can't tell you how pissed off at Josh and the Fuentes clan. I wish that Josh would just let her go, but I know that it's not gonna happen. :c I hope Chris and the guys find her soon. I'm so glad that the bullets didn't kill Chris. I hope that when Chris finds where they are hiding at, he rips Joshua's head right off his shoulders. Ugg! I just want to see the Fuentes clan perish at the hand of Chris and the guys. *cue evil laughter*
OH HELL NO!!! You made my baby get shot! WHY YOU DO THIS? This isn't fair. When are Chris and Sam gonna get a break? I can't believe Ricky found his mate. I was figuring that Ryan would find his before Ricky. But anywhore, this was an amazing update.. I started this story today, and I couldn't stop until I was done. :D I love this story so much.
I've literally spent the past 6 hours reading the prequel and this, holy mothering cow balls this is so darn amazing. I can not get over just have perfect this is. Your style of writing is perfect and just...wow. Perfection
OH FUCK CHRIS BBY i knew something was going to happen even if it was Chris at the door. well, she shouldn't have taken the necklace off like a dumb fuck. amazing update, i loved it. update soon!
Yes you shall, I'm still raring to go on a good piece of fan fiction!