@ GirlWithFlowerDress Thank you! I'm happy you liked it. The thing is I'm Dutch myself and I make more mistakes writing Dutch than I have writing English XD. But I'm really happy you liked it :3
i liked this one :) keep on writing :) as far as i can say since i'm no native speaker myself your english is pretty good just a few (not important though) mistakes but nothing dramatic ;) i saw native speakers having a worse gramma than you ;) and welcome in the club of having seen all time low in july :D (i saw them on the 3rd)