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  • midnight sunshine x

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    The way you write is amazing, I'm hooked! The frequent use of short sentences really builds up tension and I can't wait to see where this story goes! Please update soon!!! :-)
    August 19th, 2013 at 09:50am
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    @ Katherine-Lynn
    thank you for the criticism! Ugh! I always mess up with grammar! I'll look it over when I get a chance. Thank you for reading!
    July 15th, 2013 at 05:46pm
  • Katherine-Lynn

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    Wow, I'm interested to see where you take this story. The only criticism I have is that there were a few grammatical errors and I think you may have missed some words, but other than that, you're off to a great start :)
    July 15th, 2013 at 05:28pm
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