Perfectly Insane - Comments

@ CptLollipop
Des and Nate are amazing. And dude, that's awesome she went to school with them! <3 hehe. I know someone who prefers to say things are the "shitting dick nipples". c;

Okay, I'll keep you up to date, then! <3 Good luck with your entry, btw! :D

@ Sorceress:.
OHMYGOD I LOVE DES AND NATE! I used to know a girl who went to school with them, I twas obviously super jelly. I've always been partially to saying things suck cow nipples

You're entering the same contest right? I'd love to read your entry when you finish it.

@ CptLollipop
Lol I got it from Des and Nate, they're youtubers. That one is my personal favorite though, ehehe c:

No problem. I haven't read anything that actually suits my tastes quite like this, so I'm happy to support it.

@ Sorceress:.
ha ha, love the way you phrased that.

Thanks a bunch for the support! C:

What in the purple mountains majesty did I just read.
That was fantastic.

Woah. That was pretty hardcore I think. I love reading dark stuff that doesn't really have to do with suicide because there is so much suicide on this site it gets a little overwhelminag, so I was happy when I came to this.

This was really interesting and I just feel that I want to know more about these characters. Like why this girl had to die and why two of the three felt fine with it and Dawn was upset. More questions come to mind just thinking, like how August got the gun, why he and Kylie were perfectly fine killing the girl. And also, just what made them so crazy? I feel as though you could write a whole short story leading up to this point and it would be perfect. This was a great story to me, and it kept me interested the whole way through with your description and the bloodlust. One thing though, ...The door slammed open... I think that just sounds a little odd. Only people we usually hear doors slamming shut but that's not a huge thing.

I really liked this story though c: