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  • The Detective

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    I'm thinking about making a sequel after all my other books are finished.
    July 29th, 2013 at 07:02pm
  • Mad1212

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    WHAT?! But u ended it with them not talking to each other :( please do another chapter
    July 29th, 2013 at 06:27pm
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    @ Maddy-MarieXO
    Lol yes he is. I decided to have them have an argument because there had to be some sort of fight throughout the relationship, being that no relationship is perfect.
    July 23rd, 2013 at 05:46am
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    Well he's being a real prick lol
    July 23rd, 2013 at 05:34am
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    Sorry...I would have made him more excited, but I was almost asleep when I wrote that chapter.
    July 22nd, 2013 at 06:16am
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    He wasn't very excited for her to wake up :/
    July 22nd, 2013 at 06:15am
  • KillJoySynner

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    Super feels!; -;
    July 16th, 2013 at 02:36am
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    I know. I try to do that, but sometimes the paragraph is just to short to be able to do that. But i'll try and make it so that it starts a new paragraph
    July 13th, 2013 at 06:43pm
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    Friendly piece of advice, when a different person starts talking, you're suppose to start a new paragraph. Just a little pet peeve, but other than that, great story!
    July 13th, 2013 at 09:35am
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    @ aliceisdope
    lol I'm glad you like it, That's my favorite car also, It has been since the first time I saw it on Gone in Sixty Seconds.
    July 11th, 2013 at 01:20am
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    AH! I screamed when I saw she drove a 67' Shelby! Always been my favorite car.
    Love this story so far.
    July 11th, 2013 at 01:12am
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