Drowning. - Comments

I love this!! Update soon!!! :D

@ etoile.
I am ready. So ready! Bring it on.

@ fallingstar2008
Thank you sweetie pie. Glad you enjoyed it!

@ ashton irwin
Oh gosh, thanks honey. You're too kind. Hope to see more of your comments.

jesus god almighty
i'm on this like white on rice
prepare for a flurry of comments as i read along
later
when i get home from work because i have to get ready now lol
but yes
GET READY GIRL

Great chapter, loving the story so far can't wait to read the next one! :)

just found this story and I love it so far!!

This is such an incredible story. You had me hooked from the prologue. The details of how hard she scrubbed herself really made me envision this character, and what possibly could have happened to her to make her this hateful and somewhat ravenous.

You have a very beautiful, eerie way of writing, and I can't wait to read the rest of this and see how you develop it further :)

Oh my goodness. You have to update! Love this story! :)

"He was in his true form, showing her the monster he truly is. He was just waiting to sink his teeth in, claw away her skin. He was just waiting to drown her." That was eerie, that was good.

I think it's so sad she has to keep that secret from her mother. I kills me that she's so terrified.

And the damn twins found it.
I'M EXCITED FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER.

I love the connection that Isaac's already made with Florence. Obviously, that's a huge point in this story but I think it sets everything up really well. And what are the twins up to? Do they think they can get to Isaac through Florence? Crazyyyy. Update soon love! :)

I can't believe I've never encountered this story before...
That prologue... WOWZA. It stuck. IT STUCK.
Chapter one was great, I liked the transition from Happy Florence to 'Depressed' Florence.
And this line doh " Florence was just one of those girls who was naturally happy, no gloomy thoughts plagued her, misfortunate never touched her;" <-- I liked that shiz. And this line from chapter 2 "He destroyed his youth, tainted his soul, and ruined his esteem."
Anyways, chapter two is so sad. I feel bad for her. I'm interested to find out what really happened.

Great job on the story!

you're killing me here, this is like torture. Oh god.

Oh my god. This story...I cant even. Three chapters and I'm already hooked! I love the story line so far, and I love your writing. Every sentence is filled with emotion and it makes me want to read more. This story is going to be one of those great ones, especially for a Teen Wolf story. Most fan fictions that surround the show are not the best and are basically copying the entire script of Teen Wolf. However, yours is different and edgy and amazing! I cannot wait until the next update! Great job, girlie! :)

I can tell this is gonna be one of those stories that's gonna make me ache inside, and I'm oddly excited for it. I wish Florence's mom was around more because maybe then things would be slightly better???? I dunno. But I'm waiting for Isaac to turn into a werewolf and rip out that other guy's throat, ugh.

Oh man, this is really well written and I'm enjoying this. Good job, and I can't wait for the next update. :)

This is such beautiful writing! Oh my god, I'm so jealous right now. Anyways, I really like where I think this might be going and I really really hope you update soon as you can! :)

This is really well written and I am enjoying the story. The story is a very touchy subject but I am thoroughly intrigued as to how it will continue.

I see a lot of myself in Florence (pretty name btw). Awesome chapter! I can already tell I'm gonna love this.

Love it. So sad. Can't wait for the next chapter :)

It might be short, but it is amazing writing and I can already see it being an amazing story. Keep writing :D

I absolutely adore Isaac and I absolutely adore good writing (which this seems to be) so I'm gonna subscribe to this woo okay bye