Quartet - Comments

Ah! an update! Hooray! Eh, but... Eep! Scary! I'm confused! And what happened and poor baby and ah! So confused!

Love it!!

When I first clicked on this story, I had no idea what to suspect. Then I read the summary and I was like Whoa! What is going on? But as I read through the first chapter I slowly understood. The character tab also helped me understand much better. (Thanks for doing a character tab, it really helps me understand the story and gave me another perspective on the characters) Even though their murders they’re only killing the bad guys? Interesting…

But don’t get me wrong, this story so far is amazing. There are so many things I’m curious about since they all sleep in one bed and one of them goes to the table completely naked, and so on. I look forward to reading more about these unique characters. So please update soon! 

I am so glad that you recommended this! It's quite unique indeed and I enjoyed reading it. Also...I liked how the chapters were shorter but still so interesting. I'm definitely excited to see where you go with this and what their job is exactly. I enjoy your writing style as well.

Jesus Christ, Nic. I am in love with your writing style. It's so descriptive, but open and the reader can imagine every little thing that is going on. It's so smooth and easy to read and I love it. You write characters so well, and I like how each one has a very distinct personality. I can see why you're in love with these characters.

But I adore this story and I love forward to seeing how it goes. OH, and this is a bit irrelevant to the actual story but I love the divider. It's so pretty and it looks nice with the layout.

This is such an interesting concept. I really look forward to reading more. You have a real talent my friend! Real, raw talent.

This first chapter is short but very intriguing. Can i just say that you pull of cliffhangers quite well? And there's a sense of mystery of what's going to happen next. I'm only on the first chapter and I'm already loving it. :)

Omg, I'm so in love with this story, it's insane. You have such unique plots for all of your stories, and your writing style changes slightly with all of them so your stories don't seem repetitive. It's great.

I adore these characters already. They're all so interesting and different, and contrast so well with each other. Lip kind of seems like an ass, in a way, but he also seems nice so I have conflicting feelings about him.

The summary was amazing, too. It goes so insanely excited to read the story, and the chapters definitely didn't disappoint. I look forward to the action chapters!

Okay, so as far as first impressions go in the first chapter, I feel like the guy is having some kinky orgy but on second thought, I think he just loves his female companions dearly (because I checked the characters section and found out he was gay) and they're all just very..affectionate I love the way you've described them though, it sounds so poetic and flowery and

The second chapter is interesting though, but I like it. The relationship between the four is intriguing, it makes me wonder firstly if anyone's into anyone or they're all just affectionate? It's really interesting to see the different relationships, though, and I was wondering how this was going to go before I read the summary and was like, 'ahhhhh. All make sense now.' Lip as the master and the girls being his dolls is a fascinating concept and I'm so excited for this!

I love it!!

I literally had a doofy ass smile on my face as I read it. I could hardly contain my squeals.

Oh man, this was so simple but I loved it. It was such a nice beginning and you don't have much here for me to comment on but you know I forever love your writing style and your ability to tell an amazing story.

ASDFGHJKL!!! IT'S SO GREAT!! Oh, do I get to be a girl? Which girl will I be? I'm so freaking excited for this like you have no idea oh my god! AH!!!

I. am. dying.
I cannot even...
Dear lord...
Mercy...
I fucking love you and this and our new family and Im gonna die.
I love it.
New favoritest story ever.

I couldn't resist! I love it so far! :D