July 28th, 2013 at 08:40am
Contest Comment:
That was awesome and hilarious all at the same time! I have to say that I stopped reading for a second and got second hand embarrassment when Matt though Ava was there and saw that it was Matt. That was honestly the funniest freaking thing. The scene was hot too!
Hotness: 9/10
Comprehension: 10/10
Grammar/Spelling: + 5 for no errors
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Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! :)