I seriously cannot get over how damn CUTE this story is! I adore it, absolutely adore it! I always smile when I read it, it's just so... happy. Not really the word I wanted to use but it'll have to do. And I know that eventually something is going to happy to make it not happy, because I know you, but dammit I like the happy and I'm going to enjoy it while it lasts!
Is it bad that every time I hear/read the name Cliff, I instantly picture Cliff Richard?? So, in my minds eye, my sister in this story is dating/was dating Cliff Richard :D tee hee.
LOVED THE UDPATE!! Though I am with Taylor and I got a bit confused as to the name of my sister :\
But I did love it!! I want to hear more about my screwed up family :) and I want to have more Zacky and me time...hopefully when he's not screaming at me and my face isn't all puffy and bruised and whatnot :D
Oooh I quite enjoy this story! I enjoy it a lot! Are Louise and Chloe the same person? Because you started the chapter with her name as Louise but by the end if the chapter she was Chloe. It kind if confused me.
I loved this chapter though! Very much! You should update again soon. :)
Ha! The chihuahua is named after the Foo Fighters? Priceless. Brian was a darling in this chapter, so sweet. And leave it to Zack to turn his act around for a pretty face! Loved the update dear. :)
“I always thought it would be the men in white coats." - This line just cracked me up!!!!!!
Now, more importantly, two hot men saving me from a car accident?? I for one would love this!! The likelihood of it happening is very slim so I shall stick to not getting into car accidents for now :P
Loved it!! Loved it!! Loved it!! I also love the fact that you have your writing hat on again :)
Oh this is going to be cute. I can already tell. You're going to make the chihuahua a little shit, aren't you? Don't get too stereotypical lady, I quite love my chihuahua! :P I do love this start though, it's got me very interested! But no wonder all the other dog walkers "hated" the fellow, he was quite rude!
I adore it, absolutely adore it! I always smile when I read it, it's just so... happy. Not really the word I wanted to use but it'll have to do. And I know that eventually something is going to happy to make it not happy, because I know you, but dammit I like the happy and I'm going to enjoy it while it lasts!