Oh that damn sexual tension. I don't think if I was stuck in a room alone with a partially naked Isaac that I could resist touching his abs. Even if it was 'an accident'
Okay, so I watch Teen Wolf but I'm only in the first season so I've seen this Isaac Lahey character around but I don't know him. But I decided to click on this story anyways because hello, it's Teen Wolf
The first thing I noticed is that there seems to be a spacing error and all of your sentences have been chopped up weirdly, so I'd fix that. Also, the gif in the summary is really spooky (which I like) and even though I've watched the gif repeat itself a few times, I still can't help but think that slender man or something along those lines is going to pop out.
As for the content, I liked how everything began so normal but then BAM she gets kidnapped and Derek (Derek!) is going to presumably save her. At first I thought it was Isaac kidnapping her, but I'm not sure of his role in the show so I'm not to sure about this fact just yet. I like that even though she's in a really difficult situation, she's thinking about the fact that she's a virgin I thought it was cute and humourous.
I'm subbing, I'm interested to see where you go with this!