Price of Evil - Comments

vechkinfan1 (100)

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@ Total Nightmare
Thank you!!!! I'm so lad you actually enjoyed it!!!!

July 16th, 2013 at 03:52am

vechkinfan1 (100)

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@ Vixyn Of Shadows
Thank you so much! I'm glad you actually enjoyed it! It means a lot coming from a writer like you!!

July 16th, 2013 at 03:52am

Total Nightmare (100)

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Great job! :D I really enjoyed reading this.

July 16th, 2013 at 03:44am

Vixyn of Shadows (100)

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Very nice twist at the end. There's a few grammar errors but other than that awesome entry. Ouija boards are not a thing to be taken lightly. They can unleash many things. And I loved that you used that as one of the focal points.

July 15th, 2013 at 07:15am

Vixyn of Shadows (100)

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Ah I see

July 15th, 2013 at 06:33am

vechkinfan1 (100)

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@ Vixyn Of Shadows
Oh Charles is like a nickname for charlotte from where I'm from, sorry for the confusion :(

July 15th, 2013 at 06:28am

Vixyn of Shadows (100)

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Reading it now. Will leave a full comment when done. But in chapter three there's quite a few mistakes. the main one is calling Charlotte,Charles. Thought I'd mention this now and forget where I saw it lol

July 15th, 2013 at 06:19am

xyvettex (100)

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That was pretty intense, I like it:)

July 13th, 2013 at 01:25am