Polaris - Comments

YOU CAN NEVER SAY NO TO HIM, PERIOD!!!!!!! Now that, that is understood... it was so funny Zacky all baby about a stinger lol

Love this so far! Can't wait for more

I've just read this from the start and I love it! I can't wait to find out what'll happen next! Please update again soon. Xxx

Like holy crap, welcome back

I really love this story you should definitely come back to it! :)

Liking this do far!
I hope Brian doesn't use Ava..
More soon please!

I just found this story and I love it :D and hot and edible are very short words for that man. Not even saying he's the most beautiful man on earth give justice to him **dreamy sigh** I can't wait to read more and see what Jimmy comes up with.

I really like this here story of yours! I like yor writing style and the fact that you seem to know what you're writing about, always a good thing! I already love Jimmy and his over active imagination haha. Brian, take you read out of your ass, lesbian, really? xD

Can't wait for more :D

I am truly loving this story. You are doing such an awesome job with descriptions. I love the balance you have with that. I also feel that you have the personalities on point, and I know how hard it can be because they're real people. So, I just wanted to let you know I'll definitely be looking forward to future chapters :)

Must say, I really enjoy the in-depth descriptive way you write. I'm not even halfway through the first chapter yet and I can already say that this has the potential to be an amazing story. I love how you've taken a fairly popular way of bringing two characters together (i.e the talent and the help) and put your own unique twist to it. I can't say I've ever read a story where the female lead was a stage manager for the band, so that's awesome. Plus you seem to know what you're talking about too, which just means bonus points in my book. Haha.

I liked the first chapter. It was a good introduction to the dynamics of her daily life and her interactions with the band themselves. It was interesting how she doesn't consider herself friends with them, because although it makes sense on a professional level, they seem like the kind of band that likes to make their crew one whole big happy family. Haha.

She's an incredibly big person to not be even a little perturbed by Syn flat out ignoring her and not giving her so much as a nod of acknowledgement once in a while. I don't think I could work for someone (which in my opinion, she basically is) and have them be that self-absorbed that they can't even acknowledge me. I'd be bitter and pissed! Hahaha.

Well, nice to see he's finally noticed Her. Although I must say I'm hoping he will remember her name next time they meet... it would be nice. Hahaha.

(Don't worry about your use of exclamation marks, btw. I use wayyy too many ellipses, but I just can't seem to make myself stop. You'll see as my comments go on. Haha)

Aww, I could totally see Jimmy sprawled across their laps like that... it seems like something he'd have done often.

Well, as I said before, I understand her wanting to keep a professional distance from the band, but considering they spend so much time together, I'm glad Jimmy talked her into hanging out with them. And isn't he the little detective? Haha. I like how well he knows his best friend and can interpret his thoughts so easily. It's quite amusing. Hahaha.

She's lesbian. There is no other logical explanation to why she wouldn't take advantage of me.

Wow. Seriously?! Oh... I just want to slap him upside his head so bad right now. I don't care if the guy is sexy as all hell, it's no excuse to be so damn egotistical! Argh... there is such a thing as a type and maybe he just doesn't fit into hers. Gah!

I appreciate Jimmy's need to snap Brian out of his current ways... but I hope he doesn't end up getting Ava hurt or anything by doing so. I'm also hoping Ava stays strong for as long as possible and denies any advances from Brian, although I'm already pretty sure she will based off Jimmy's analysis. I hope. Haha.

Really enjoying this so far and looking forward to more

Um, why was I never told about this fantastic story? In love, can't wait for the next chapter!

oh hello new favorite story. =D oh the scheming Jimmy. Love it!

Ah, Ava vai dar um choque de realidade em Syn! wewe

Haha crazy

Hahahaha "to be one sexy, irresistible motherfucker" XD I died laughing at that XD So ignorant

Haha I loved that. It was cool to see insight from Jimmy and to see the inner-workings of Brian.

Can't wait to read more!

YES! update more!! MORE I SAY!

Please :3

Please update soon! Love this story.

U r on a roll missy I luv it so much