May 4th, 2015 at 04:18pm
Thanks so much!
Wonder - Comments
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@ The Alpha's Angel
Thanks so much! May 4th, 2015 at 04:18pm -
This is really cute, and something new as well, you did a really good job with this one :)May 4th, 2015 at 01:49pm
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@ tabula rasa.
Awwwww, thank you!March 11th, 2014 at 01:52am -
This was so cute!! Wonderful little story.
March 11th, 2014 at 01:44am -
@ charity_hope
Thanks! March 4th, 2014 at 03:56pm -
Awww... this is cute!
March 4th, 2014 at 11:15am -
@ Death The Angel
Thanks so much! March 4th, 2014 at 01:42am -
Eep!
A kitten story! Love it! March 4th, 2014 at 12:41am -
@ Snow.White.Queen.
Thanks so much! August 7th, 2013 at 05:06pm -
Well this one is cute. That's the first thing that came into my wind while reading it, but nothing much more can be said. I like the way you wrote about an animal, not too many authors can do that and actually pull it off, but I think you have. This does, like the other story I've commented on, lack description, I'd love some more because the ones that you have given are generally very good. I dislike the way you write thirty as ''30'' it looks untidy among the rest of the writing, but that's just my opinion. The layout is cute, it's easy to read too which is always a plus. Good job here, my favourite story of yours so far.
August 7th, 2013 at 04:48pm -
@ fascination.
Thanks so much for the feedback!
I'll be sure to edit some parts.August 6th, 2013 at 04:24am -
this layout is so cute and it's so refreshing and unique to find a story based upon an animal. And the story is even better because the kitten in the picture reminds me of my own kitten, Ty
I really like this cute little story and it was so nice to see a happy story opposed to all the horrifically sad ones i've been reading lately! The only thing I wasn't a big fan of is that you sometimes you split up paragraphs when it was unneeded such as the first two paragraphs that could easily be placed into one. Overall, I think this was such a cute, fun story and I'm glad to have come across it. Plus, the name is so awesome :D!August 6th, 2013 at 04:01am -
@ Autore.Di.Amore;
Thank you July 18th, 2013 at 07:54pm -
This was so cute!! I love it!July 18th, 2013 at 07:52pm
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@ ebony_goddess
Thank you. July 14th, 2013 at 04:58am -
@ January Rose
You do the same hun :) its only natural. The little kitten was really cute though and you have so much talent. It was short and sweet.July 14th, 2013 at 02:04am -
@ ebony_goddess
Thank you! I personally didn't think this was that great (since I had no idea how to end it), but thanks so much for your support on my stories and I really appreciate it.July 14th, 2013 at 01:17am -
As always, you are a great writer :) loved itJuly 14th, 2013 at 12:56am
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@ sempiternal.
Thank you so much! You made my day! July 13th, 2013 at 06:57pm
Thanks so much!