I know this is for a contest BUT I need more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
July 17th, 2014 at 02:37am
Basket Case - Comments
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Okay, this was so beautifully written and dark. I loved it. In the end I really felt sorry for her.November 2nd, 2013 at 09:46pm
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This was a very haunting story, yet still light-hearted. I love the layout, except for the font in the main passage. It reflects the story very well, how she's hiding in her own bubble of bliss, with the dark truth being covered by brightness.
I can't recall any errors. I enjoyed it very much.September 21st, 2013 at 07:55am -
Nice story, I really enjoyed it! I'm a GD writer myself and like to support the GD Fiction community on Mibba! Can't have these stories die out xD
I really like how you wrote the detail, it was well implemented and I could definitely get an idea of what was happening. I got a little heartache reading it, some bits made me feel lusty, others made me angry. There was a nice combination of feelings here!July 31st, 2013 at 11:23pm -
Nice story, I really enjoyed it! I'm a GD writer myself and like to support the GD Fiction community on Mibba! Can't have these stories die out xD
I really like how you wrote the detail, it was well implemented and I could definitely get an idea of what was happening. I got a little heartache reading it, some bits made me feel lusty, others made me angry. There was a nice combination of feelings here!July 31st, 2013 at 11:23pm -
Everything about this is beautiful. I seriously love it (especially Mike). You're so talented and you never stop surprising me! OMG. I love your stories so much! xoxoxxoxoxoxooxxoJuly 31st, 2013 at 07:23am
