It's a Love Hate Relationship - Comments

@ pup.
I'll figure it out in no time and I'll try to update soon. I just seem to get writers block sometimes <3

@ CookieMonster98
Yeah layouts can be tricky at times, haha. I believe there are forums with help though.
Can't wait till the new chapter! :3

@ pup.
Thank you I'll take that into account and do that next time. The only thing is I don't know how to do a layout yet. I'm still working on it. <3

I'm liking the storyline a lot so far :) Just a little word of advice though. Each time a different person speak, you should introduce a new paragraph. It's easier for readers to understand what's going on and easier on the eyes. It's just that I noticed that sometimes you forgot to do that. Also, you should definitely get a layout for this story! It'll attract more readers, I'm sure.

It's really a shame you don't have more comments and feedback! This story has potential :3