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  • gipsy danger.

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    I really enjoyed reading this, reading about the history of the relationship and how the narrator spoke of Shea. Awesome job :)
    July 26th, 2013 at 11:12pm
  • lilynotlyla

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    @ Mlle_Purdy
    ...Sometimes I have typos and they change characters. I'M SORRY. >.<
    July 25th, 2013 at 02:20am
  • little man;

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    @ lilynotlyla
    It's not a girl.. Oups xD
    July 25th, 2013 at 02:18am
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    You can tell that she definitely has strong feelings for Shea. I just wish that we could have seen more of their relationship instead of just being told about it. I think you've got a strong story line, just maybe some more detail. Nice job.
    July 25th, 2013 at 02:16am
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