Nel Vicolo - Comments

This was amazing to read. And so hot, omfg.
I wish you the best of luck in this contest! :3 <3

It was great...really sexy, even though I don't get the Ian thing. =/ But your writing was superb, as always! Good luck!

@ sup.jessay
You should be proud. It turned out amazing. And HOT.

@ P.B.Darkside
omg. i am DYING. lmfao. your comment.. i'm STILL laughing at it!! i love Blanche! that gif.. omgosh i'm dying. thank you for the comment :D i struggled, honestly, because i wanted to get everything just right and i was never happy with what i had. actually, at the beginning, i was like "wtf! HOW am i gonna get 3000 words!?" but then i got to like 2600 and i wasn't even at the sex yet and i was like "oh. i got this. this is easy!"

Yum. If you will pardon my French, your banner is sexy as shit.

Gahhh, we all know Ian has a pair of the most gorgeous eyes on the planet and the way you described them was freakin' amazing. Seriously, I could almost feel his eyes on me as I read the way they changed with his emotions.

Yeah, Ian, kick that dude's ass! I was cheering him on through the whole fight scene, and none too quietly either. That guy messed with the wrong chick LMAO.

Aww yeah, tongue ring for the win!
Unf, unf, unf. That was incredibly hot, dark alleyway sex, and the most proper thank you anyone can ever give.

The banter, the build-up, the rescue, the descriptions, the SEX, everything was fucking fantastic!!!!

Perfect story is perfect.

God, and it was already so hot in my room. If you'll excuse me..............