Alone - Comments

I fist pumped when I realized you kept Joe Vitale. Like lilynotlyla said, we wanted to really challenge people. I think you did a really great job. This one shot was cute. The meet up was great and all through to the end. I think how you ended it, it was so cute.

1) Thank you for sticking with Joey V.! I was kind of worried that you'd switch. We wanted to try to challenge people with some players who rarely get stories.
2) For the most part, I like this. I'd avoid the sparkly backgrounds, though. It's kind of distracting to try to read.

THIS WAS SO CUTE. I really loved how fluid everything was and how easy it was to read not to mention that the whole thing was so cute I loved the way it ended!

I'm not a penguins fan (and I don't know anything reag about Vitale) but I know you're a good writer so I thought is check it out - and I wasn't disappointed! Great job and I hope you do well in the contest!