The Divine Infection - Comments

Please update!

@ lolbrittany
i know because i don't write in first a lot and i tried my best to make it make sense. Just remember all the odd chapters are my doing. I'm surprised you didn't point out that i capitalize every other word

Also, you switch a lot from first person (saying I) to third person (saying him). That gets really confusing. x)

Also, you switch a lot from first person (saying I) to third person (saying him). That gets really confusing. x)

I realllllly love this story! If I could give you a small tip, it would help with reading if you gave it a bit more spacing. Other than that, I love the plot line, the characters, everything! I can't wait for more updates! <3