June 16th, 2016 at 08:12pm
Violated - Comments
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Do you think it could end? I miss it so much!June 16th, 2016 at 08:08pm
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Please update again soon!
April 19th, 2016 at 04:41pm -
@ insufferable;
Sorry about that. I had a warning on it. I think j might have edited it and accidentally removed it and forgot to put it back. :(February 4th, 2016 at 05:41am -
The last chapter was really sad. She's already thinking that its ok for Matt to do that to her. She needs to get out of this hell she's in. I am curious to see what part Johnny plays in all this. And if we can trust Brian or Zacky. I just have this bad feeling Zacky is working for Matt too. Maybe he lied about the police to see if she would tell the truth. Can't wait for the next chapter.January 29th, 2016 at 08:11am
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This was really intense.
I always have admired stories of the darker nature and this deff makes the cut. Your characters, although sadistic, are believable in the setting you've created. I also appreciate how you haven't just made this a torture fic - There is seriously underlying issues present apart from the rape, such as corruption and how people are so quick to call mental illness these days.
I really hope Zacky is able to help her, although I have a feeling that someone will die before the end of this. I kind of just want him to kidnap her and run off into the sunset with her. I look forward to your next update on this - I really did enjoy it and Casey is an original character I really do want to hear about some more.January 28th, 2016 at 01:35pm -
Summary:
I like how short and sweet your summary is, though I'm wondering why she was in prison. The summary definitely provides questions that I'd like to know.
Chapter One:
I like how you just jumped right in with the story. Your descriptions made me feel like I was there, which proves that you showed what was going on rather than simply told.
Geez, Mr. Sanders is kind of a jerk. It's not like she could help the amount of traffic that was on the streets. I can definitely understand why she'd be even more nervous by his behavior.
Geez, his behavior is making me so angry. Like I understand having a little control over the person, but he's just being a flat out douchebag.
WHAT THE FUCK! Mr. Sanders is a creep. Uh-huh, no thanks. I'd be calling people about that.
Jesus, Sanders needs to find someone else and get himself laid if he's so 'attractive'. Ugh, he honestly disgusts me. I really hope Casey doesn't put up with it.
I really hope things end badly for Sanders. I really, really do.
So I skipped the end of the chapter due to the fact that I didn't know rape would actually be detailed. I got really uncomfortable by it and, honestly, it would've been great if you would've put some sort of warning.
I didn't see any mistakes and you're writing is pretty great, but I won't be continuing this. Good luck.January 27th, 2016 at 10:39am -
Three months without violated, omg, i'll dieeee D:
My favorite story ever <3November 13th, 2015 at 02:53pm -
Please please please update soon!October 12th, 2015 at 11:00pm
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@ gatesguardian.
Going through the same thing! I just graduated college but am looking for a job -_- T_TAugust 15th, 2015 at 01:27am -
This is great! I can't wait till the next update!August 13th, 2015 at 03:59am
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@ Ilovea7x
thank you. :) that means a lot.August 12th, 2015 at 10:19pm -
Love your storiesAugust 12th, 2015 at 09:46pm
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Love your storiesAugust 12th, 2015 at 09:46pm
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Love your storiesAugust 12th, 2015 at 09:44pm
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I have eighteen years and I just had study for my whole life. Now I'm in the university and I have friends and I need my own money but my mother says "you don't need money. You need study". But the things in my country are a kind of hard - not for us yet - and my parents don't want to see I'm a young adult. I really wait that the things for you came easy and you found a job you like!August 11th, 2015 at 09:22pm
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@ theenigma @ BlackMorphine
thank you, ladies.
yeah... the situation with the job was awful. but I'm free from that now.
but I haven't found another job yet... & that's becoming a huge problem. mostly from my mother, driving my absolutely crazy. it's like every 5 seconds she starts getting on to me about money, bills & a job. like I'm 24 years old... I KNOW I need a job but I'm not completely at fault. I can apply all day, I'm not the one doing the hiring. lol or I would have hired me already.
as for Violated, I'm glad you guys liked the chapter. I have the next 2 chapters outlined & know what I want to happen. thank god! I need to update some other stories first & then I'll get the next chapter out. ☺️August 11th, 2015 at 05:51pm -
Oh my god! I'm so sorry about you situation! I've read you blog and I know some things about your abusive boss.
Great chapter!!! Omg my Matt is back! <3August 11th, 2015 at 03:31pm -
I'm sorry to hear about your troubles! I hope you're safe!
Lovely update btw <3 makes me love mattyAugust 11th, 2015 at 01:08pm -
@ BlackMorphine
I'm so sorry it's been so long. life has been crazy lately. so crazy. I haven't been writing at all & I'm working at a summer camp as a camp counselor so I'm busy 24/7, but I will be starting writing again. no worries.July 6th, 2015 at 07:52am
I know. I'm sorry it has been so long since I have updated. I have been trying to re-read my stories so that I can update. this one is on my list next! I haven't fully decided what I want to happen, but I'm sure I'll figure it out. (hopefully)